Fajita's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[RE-UNdead ep.6]

eh...

animation was decent but the jokes weren't very funny and it didn't grab my attention very well. it dragged on kinda slow. practice writing dialogue between characters cuz it didn't flow naturally at all. 5/10

Khris responds:

i thought that was the downside to this episode aswell, diolauge

[December 20, 2012]

Not bad

but needs work. animation and audio needs extensive work. and the epilogue at the beginning wasn't as funny as it could of been with a bit of refinement and a bit more tongue and cheek humor. study some Monty python public announcement skits such as "How not to be seen" , "Gangs of grannies", and the bit about Death for reference on what I'm talking about. and the animation is a bit slow and blocky but i did enjoy the style of the figures. keep going, you'll get better. 6/10

popsicle-of-doom responds:

Thanks for the suggestions

[Perpetual Workday]

Needs work.

has potential to be hilarious. but its lacking refinement in voice work, scripted dialogue and plot development. I'm sure future additions will show improvement if you develop in those areas. as of right now i give it a 6/10.

[Paddy's Adderall Emporium]

yup

that was funny. it made me chuckle. try to clean up some of the scripted dialogue a bit cuz at some points it sounded like you lost track of what you were sayin. and try some crazy music in the background it might help a bit i think. i'd like to see some more of these from you. so in conclusion. Good job.

[Silence Promotion]

uh..

i didn't understand this one bit. was it an advertisement for a game? cuz if it was it made me not want to play it. and the flash was kinda sub par

[Fågelskrämman]

Woot!!

awesome flash. smooth all around animation and a great concept. i like happy endings. which are not typical on newgrounds. I honestly expected a harvester pr something of that nature to come by and tear the scarecrow to shreds. but it didn't, good job.

[Theory Vs Terantula]

Awesome

this is a pretty solid piece. smooth animation and a pretty kickin song i give it an 8

[Shake n' Cube]

yeah

woot go aqua teen.

[Several Ways to get own]

Its decent

the animation is a bit rigid. so I'm giving it a 4 for that and for gross overuse of DBZ sound effects

[The Rich Monring Show 2]

Awesome

a variety show staring an Osterage. now all you need is a bear riding a tricycle.